LO3 Offline edit

There are no major issues in this short film although you can see the camera in the shot of the electric wall. This can be changed by turing the brightness down so it less noticeable. Some of the clips have a slight rock but it is not that noticeable, so they are still useable. There also needs to be a transition between clips to make it more smooth and subtile. The audio sound clear and good so it will not need changing and the background music is quiet enough. The audio with interview with Brian is not synced so that needs to be changes. Also there needs to be some text that explains who he is so the audience will know. The title sequence also needs to be added to explain what the documentary is about and where it is focused. There also needs to be credits at the end to show who contributed what.  Overall I feel the offline edit is good and with some editing techniques it will be a successful documentary.